Guidelines for Writing Sustainable Home Project Descriptions

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Know Your Purpose and Audience

Define the primary reader

Are you writing for homeowners, lenders, building officials, or neighbors concerned about construction impacts? Call out the audience explicitly, then tailor vocabulary, depth of explanation, and examples so they see themselves in the story. Share your audience in the comments and we’ll suggest targeted phrasing.

Set the objective

Decide whether you’re informing, persuading, documenting compliance, or fundraising. State the objective in the opening paragraph and repeat it through your headings. Clarity of intent prevents drift and keeps every claim relevant to sustainability outcomes. Tell us your objective and we’ll recommend a matching outline.

Choose tone and reading level

Use plain language with precise terms. Replace jargon like “high-performance fenestration” with “triple-pane windows with low U-values,” then define metrics. Aim for short sentences, active voice, and accessible reading level. Subscribe for a quick-reference style guide you can paste into any draft.

Lead With Evidence: Metrics That Matter

Use EUI (kWh/m²·year or kBtu/ft²·year), HERS Index, or Passive House demand. Provide a baseline (code minimum or existing home), the modeled or measured result, and percent improvement. Cite tools, dates, and weather files used. Want a metrics cheat sheet? Subscribe and we’ll send the printable version.

Lead With Evidence: Metrics That Matter

Separate operational and embodied carbon. Report kgCO2e with system boundaries (A1–A3 manufacturing, A4 transport, A5 construction, B6 operations, B7 water). Reference LCAs, EPDs, and any assumptions. Invite readers to review your sources and share their preferred tools in the comments.

Passive Design, Envelope, and Systems

Describe envelope performance clearly

Provide wall, roof, and window U-values/R-values, thermal bridge treatments, and airtightness targets (ACH50). Pair numbers with consequences: quieter rooms, steadier temperatures, smaller equipment. Add installation quality notes and verification plans. Ask readers which envelope details they struggle to explain, and we’ll draft sample sentences.

Explain passive strategies in context

Discuss orientation, shading, glazing ratios, daylighting, cross-ventilation, and thermal mass relative to local climate. Use micro-stories—like moving a window 40 cm to cut summer glare—to show design decisions in action. Invite feedback on climate-specific tactics you’d like covered next.

Detail efficient, all-electric systems

Specify heat pump capacities and COPs, ERV efficiency, induction cooking, heat pump water heaters, and smart controls. State utility rates and expected bill impacts. A client’s skeptical uncle became an advocate after his first month’s bill—share moments like that to make numbers memorable.

Circularity, Durability, and Maintenance

Describe modular assemblies, mechanical fasteners, and reversible details that enable future upgrades and material recovery. Note salvage strategies for doors, fixtures, and flooring. Readers love actionable examples—drop a photo request in the comments if you want a visual guide to document disassembly points.

Circularity, Durability, and Maintenance

State expected service lives, warranties, and exposure testing. Connect durability to reduced lifecycle impacts and fewer disruptions for residents. Tell the small story: a porch detail that prevented rot through three storm seasons. Ask subscribers which durability metrics they report so we can align our templates.

Circularity, Durability, and Maintenance

Include an owner-friendly maintenance schedule, filter sizes, and costs. Explain how upkeep preserves energy savings and air quality. Invite users to download our maintenance checklist, and encourage them to share refinements from their own homes for a community-updated version.

Community, Equity, and Affordability

Design for accessibility and inclusion

Note universal design features like step-free entries, wider doors, and tactile wayfinding. Explain how these choices support aging in place and multigenerational households. Ask readers to comment with inclusive features they’ve specified so we can craft a richer, shared checklist.

Source locally and build skills

Highlight local materials and workforce training that reduce transport impacts and grow green jobs. If a contractor partnership created apprenticeships, tell that story. Invite your audience to share regional suppliers for a crowdsourced map of low-carbon options.

Address affordability and energy burden

Translate performance into monthly savings, resilience during outages, and comfort in heat waves. Include incentives, rebates, and financing tools. We once saw a family redirect utility savings to insulate an attic room—small wins add up. Subscribe for our affordability explainer to copy into proposals.

Storytelling, Structure, and Visuals

Begin with a moment—a drafty nursery in January, a boiling attic in July—then show how design solved it measurably. Human stakes invite readers to care about metrics. Share your favorite opening line and we’ll help sharpen it live in the comments.

Standards, Documentation, and Verification

Cite pathways like ENERGY STAR, LEED Homes, Passive House, Zero Energy Ready, or WELL. State which credits or criteria your strategies address. Invite readers to request crosswalks between programs so they can reuse descriptions across submissions efficiently.